Thursday, June 1, 2017

Persuasive writing

We are learning to write a persuasive argument.

I believe that Cinderella should have gone to the ball because the king’s men said that every person in the village could come. I think that she was one of the kindest in there and she deserved to go she didn't do anything wrong . I think that the step mother and daughters shouldn't have gone because of the way they treated her.

I believe that Cinderella’s stepmother  should have listened to the king’s man when they asked is there any more young ladies in the house. I believe that Cinderella’s stepmother should of listened and not lied when they asked her.


  1. Hi Moana my name Is Paris I'm 12 years old and I am a year 8 student at Kawakawa primary school. I agree completely with you the king did say that everyone one was aloud to attend. Any way I really enjoyed that. Happy blogging

  2. Hi Moana my name is Tierley I am 12 years and I am a year 8 at Grey Main school. I think you are right about Cinderella being allowed to go to the ball and it is never right to lie to some one. Bye for now.

  3. Kia Ora Moana,
    What an awesome blogpost about Cinderella. I agree that she deserved to go to the ball and Cinderella's stepmother was wrong to lie. You had a very persuasive argument.
    Just a reminder that the Summer Learning Journey officially began today! You can find the activities here:
    Can't wait to see some awesome blog posts from you this summer. Remember you can add photos, videos or anything else you'd like to share in your activities.
    Nga Mihi, Georgia